IAIN KELLY

CANADIAN ROCKIES RETIREMENT HOME

‘You don’t think the mountain range is enough to keep them out?’

‘Nope,’ Frank spat as he knocked in the last fence post.

‘But if they manage to get over that,’ Giles pointed to the tall peaks in the distance, ‘then this fence isn’t going to stop them.’

Frank threw down the hammer and looked at his son-in-law. ‘Point is, my property is clearly demarcated now. If they Yankees step onto it, then I’m within my rights to take action.’

Giles made a mental note to make sure the Care Home didn’t keep any weapons on the property.


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Copyright Russell Gayer

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Struggling for inspiration and time with this prompt, but here’s to a Happy New Year and all the best for 2019 to you all!


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90 responses to “CANADIAN ROCKIES RETIREMENT HOME”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar

    At least Frank is keeping active and alert

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He has a purpose, and that’s all he needs.

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  2. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Happy New Year Iain. A good starter!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Di, all the best for 2019.

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  3. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    One of those “first I laughed and then I cried stories.” Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rochelle

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  4. theministryofshrawleywalks Avatar

    Well, good stuff, a hopelessly lost man in his own world, very sad.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Although he may be happy in his own world and perhaps that’s the best we can ask for.

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  5. Varad Avatar

    They haven’t given up on him and that’s good to see. And yes, hope there aren’t any weapons lying around.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Yrs, harmless so long as they keep him unarmed!

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  6. ceayr Avatar

    I thought Canadians were peaceful types?
    Fun story, with a hidden depth.

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  7. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    War’s a-comin. I have a feeling that fighting the Yankees remains a lost cause.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It’s not often worked out well for those involved

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  8. neeltheauthor- author of WHEN LIFE THROWS THOSE CURVE BALLS Avatar

    This isn’t the end…there’s more to come. Lovely story Kelly.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  9. Lynn Love Avatar

    Well, at least he has a plan! Love your wry humour, your twist of the surreal. Lovely

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Lynn 🙂

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      1. Lynn Love Avatar

        My pleasure

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  10. Sandra Avatar

    Spirit will keep you going long after the other faculties deteriorate. I kind of like the sound of him.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Me too Sandra

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  11. Anita Avatar

    Property lovers need to be vigilant and alert.
    Wish you a very happy new year!
    Zapped – Anita

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Anita, Happy New Year 🙂

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  12. James Pyles Avatar

    LOL. Probably how my Dad would have reacted if he lived long enough to require being placed in an assisted living home. 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, yes I can imagine 🙂

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  13. Rachel Bjerke Avatar

    Ha! Loved this! I detect no inspiration/time struggle whatsoever… fine work!

    Happy 2019 to you as well!!

    -Rachel

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Rachel, too kind. Happy New Year to you 🙂

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  14. ttay213 Avatar

    Short and sweet, but you can still tell a lot about the character from it. You’re such a great writer- I’m surprised you were lacking inspiration.

    Happy new year!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you for such kind words! Happy New Year! 🙂

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  15. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    An interesting flash, it has potential

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Roberta 🙂

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  16. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Happy New Year, Iain. That wall thing is ever present, isn’t it?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      With a prompt like this, it’s hard to avoid – it does seem to keep cropping up! Happy New Year Janet, all the best for 2019!

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  17. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    But will the Yankees pay for the fence?

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  18. Carol J Forrester Avatar

    At least he’s putting up the fence himself. ;p
    I really enjoyed reading this, possibly because it reminds me of a few older family members I have. (Farming families are filled with old men building fences to keep things out.)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ha, thank you Carol 🙂

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  19. plaridel Avatar

    i don’t know but he reminds me of somebody with an orange hair who became president. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Maybe this is where he ends up

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  20. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    Building fences. Perhaps it’s a man thing. Interesting story

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Definitely a human thing.

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  21. Kalpana Solsi Avatar
    Kalpana Solsi

    It is good that the senior citizen is keeping himself busy in the retirement home. wish they do not keep any weapons. It would be dangerous.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      It would indeed!

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  22. Dale Avatar

    I canna lie… I did let out a chuckle.
    And those Yanks would be best to remember us Canucks burned down their Whitehouse… so they should keep to their side of the fence.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I based Frank’s attitude on one of the few Canadians I know online… 😉

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      1. Dale Avatar

        He he he…. 😉

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  23. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Ha! I took an almost similar route. Have an amazing new year Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – same to you!

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  24. i b arora Avatar

    but in the the Yankees will creep in

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They always do.

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  25. draliman Avatar

    Ha, Frank’s gonna be a handful!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      The staff will love him!

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  26. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Frank certainly knows what is his. But how is he going to protect it from being encroached upon?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think he has a losing battle on his hands.

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  27. granonine Avatar

    Iain, I just finished reading your new book, A Justified State. I could hardly put it down! Chillingly prophetic and believable in the not-too-distant future. Great writing, and congratulations.

    As for this week’s FF, you created two sympathetic characters who are not quite in sync with each other. Both are believable. I think the older generations will identify more easily with Frank, the younger with Giles. Excellent dialogue, really puts the point across.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much, so good to hear such positive words! Do spread the word and if you are on Goodreads or Amazon a little review is always welcome if you have time. The aim is to have a sequel later in the year so look out for news of that! Look forward to another year of reading and writing 🙂

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  28. Liz Young Avatar

    To paraphrase – a Canadian’s home is his castle!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      🙂 Happy New Year Liz

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  29. csheldonblog Avatar

    Happy New Year x

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      And to you 🙂

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      1. csheldonblog Avatar

        someone recommended your booik to me the other day…

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      2. Iain Kelly Avatar

        I hope you took them up on the recommendation! Good to know the word is being spread around 🙂

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      3. csheldonblog Avatar

        Borrowed it for my kindle 😀 soon as i finish this one I’ll be on it

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      4. Iain Kelly Avatar

        Fantastic, look forward to seeing what you think of it! 🙂

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  30. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Wonderful story as always. Giles is a good son-in-law, not bursting his father’s bubble, just making sure he’s safe. That’s all we can ask for, to have family around to make sure we don’t hurt ourselves when we enter that stage of life. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Brenda

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  31. Russell Avatar

    You gotta protect the ole homestead, right?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Exactly. Thanks Russell

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  32. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh well told. I hope anything that could be used as a weapon is locked away, I fear he’ll find something. It is a terrible thing, old age and failing memories

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ageing in general is terrible I find…

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  33. Jacob C. Edwards Avatar

    Hell, I’d cross the border to Canada if I lived further north. Beautiful country out there. I can see why he wants to defend it. Great story man 🙂 I liked it a lot

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jacob 🙂

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  34. Piyali Avatar

    Nice take on the prompt, Lain, the fence reminded me of Donald Trump’s wall. Happy 2019, Lain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, Happy New Year to you too 🙂

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  35. 4963andypop Avatar

    The fear of “invasion” from the southern border appears to be contagious. 😊

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Spreading all over the globe it seems!

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  36. Violet Lentz Avatar

    A pleasure as always. You were missed .

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, a few days off from writing over the holidays, good to be back with recharged energy 🙂

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  37. StuHN Avatar

    Those darn Yankees! Can’t win a world series, the lot of them. 🙂 Fun with the cantankerous.

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  38. ForgivingConnects Avatar

    Ha ha, Iain, this is great! Your writing really pulls me in. Thank you.

    Happy New Year!! All the blessings to you,
    Debbie

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Debbie, Happy New Year 🙂

      Like

  39. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    I love these two, they feel so real. Maybe Giles could buy his FIL a watergun? 😀
    A happy new year to you, too, and congrats on the book.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you – I do hope you will give it a read! Good idea with the watergun 🙂

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  40. Margaret Avatar

    Very funny. He knows his enemy and he knows the merits of a good fence.

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  41. Moon Avatar
    Moon

    I admire the way you did the dialogue.
    Great story, as always.

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  42. subroto Avatar

    Seems to be the season to put up fences. Let’s hope the Care Home has all sharp objects under lock and key.

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  43. Anshu Bhojnagarwala Avatar

    If the mountains couldn’t contain them, how will some legalities do that!! Good one, Iain!

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  44. Ellie Scott Avatar

    Aw – both funny and so sad. Wonderful!

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  45. magarisa Avatar

    Frank is the most territorial Canadian I’ve ever encountered! 😉

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