IAIN KELLY

CLASS SOCIETY

‘Why do you do it, mother?’ Jennie asked, as her mother tucked her into bed and prepared to return to her guests.

‘Do what, darling?’

‘The singing.’

‘What’s wrong with my singing?’

Jennie thought back to the after dinner entertainment. Father sat at the piano, Jennie next to him to turn his pages, and Mother standing in front of the gathered gentry from the city. Her voice screeched through the room, like nails being scratched down a blackboard. Afterwards, the guests would take it in turns to compliment her performance. Jennie thought they all must be mad or tone deaf.

‘It’s awful, mother,’ Jennie answered.

‘Of course it is, darling.’

‘But if you know you can’t sing, why do you do it?’

‘If these nouveau riche from the city want my patronage and my money, I like to make them earn it. It’s rather fun to watch them having to smile and clap politely and lie to me.’

‘What if they tell you the truth?’

‘Then they go up in my estimation completely. Goodnight dearest.’


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Written as part of Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. The challenge is to write a flash fiction story in around 150 words, based on the weekly photo prompt. Thanks as always to the challenge host Priceless Joy. For more information visit HERE.

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46 responses to “CLASS SOCIETY”

  1. Iain Kelly Avatar

    I think it has just still to officially open yet, should be there at the stroke of the hour.

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  2. Priceless Joy Avatar

    Hahahaha! Love it! It is somewhat similar to mine. The lady in my story can’t sing either. 😀 Great story Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks PJ. Must be something about the picture that suggests she can’t sing! 🙂

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      1. Priceless Joy Avatar

        Hahaha! Must be! LOL!

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  3. Jade M. Wong Avatar

    LOL! I love her sense of humor ;D Very fun take Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
  4. James Avatar

    I think at least one other story mentions how she can’t sing. I think she sings exquisitely.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I don’t know, something about the picture suggests it’s​ not enjoyable 🙂

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  5. Michael Avatar

    Very good Iain, love the reasoning you had in this one..

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  6. E.F. Olsson Avatar

    Great story, Iain! That was a fun read.

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  7. alphabetstory Avatar

    Nicely done with a nice kick at the end.

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  8. shivamt25 Avatar

    haha! She knows she sings awfully! Good one!

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  9. Fatima Fakier Deria Avatar

    Nice satirical piece on society. People would flatter you for their own benefit and gain, but tell me the truth and I might just respect you. Good one!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s the idea, thank you 🙂

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  10. Martin Cororan Avatar
    Martin Cororan

    God your writing’s awful. Please make the cheque payable to ‘Mr. Mar…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      🙂 very good. If only i was in the position to be a rich benefactor!

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  11. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    The truth is always best in the end, but I will say it only once – great story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Michael

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  12. joyroses13 Avatar

    LOL! How creative, enjoyed it! Smart lady.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Joy 🙂

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  13. swritings Avatar

    Haha! Really loved this! 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, glad you liked it 🙂

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  14. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    I like her…a lot! Not sure I’d want to hear her though! Nice one Iain.

    My tale is called ‘One beautiful day’

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Would you tell her the truth though? Thanks Keith.

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  15. Singledust Avatar

    Nice story Iain! I feel that even though she can’t sing she is a wise woman to teach her daughter the ways of society. But not much has changed in the human race for life has it from then till now? Shallow people still sucking up to the rich and wealthy to gain a foot into society eh Iain, always more behind the words you write here.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you. I’m glad you saw the relevance of it in today’s world too, only now it is big business and companies that have taken the place of the inherited​ rich.

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  16. Shivangi Avatar

    What a lady…! And all this while she was having fun at their expense while they suffered through her song… brilliant take!

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  17. Chris C. Avatar

    Clever lady! It certainly speaks very well of her character and how desperate people are to climb up. Only children are the most honest.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Children will always call it like it is, we should all learn from them.

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  18. neelwritesblog Avatar

    The lady can’t sing. Hahaha. Good one, Kelly. Check mine where she can sing and how.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Neel, look forward to reading yours.

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  19. luckyjc007 Avatar

    Ha! Ha! Her guests patronize her for the wrong reasons, so she makes them earn it with her misrable singing and she gets an enjoyment out of it. I guess it’s a win, win situation.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      For her it’s definitely win win. Thanks for reading.

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  20. rosemawrites Avatar

    “‘If these nouveau riche from the city want my patronage and my money, I like to make them earn it. It’s rather fun to watch them having to smile and clap politely and lie to me.’”

    Woow! What a fun and for me fierce take on the prompt! 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. rosemawrites Avatar

        you’re welcome! ❤

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  21. jupitermagic Avatar

    very clever ! pukka business minded the mother is !:)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Pukka indeed 🙂

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  22. J.A. Prentice Avatar

    Great story! I love the mother’s attitude.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks, she is a smart lady 🙂

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