ANOTHER WEEKEND OVER

Frank left the apartment early to head into work.

He found Hamish on the front lawn.

Hamish was gagged and hooded, strapped in a straight jacket covered in fake blood, locked inside a shopping roll cage with crime scene tape wrapped round it.

Frank had left the club early the previous night, leaving Hamish with his student friends.

‘Good night?’ Frank asked, as he passed.

Hamish nodded and mumbled something that sounded like ‘the best.’

‘See you tonight. I’ll let them know you won’t be in work today,’ Frank called over his shoulder as he walked down the path.


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Copyright Liz Young

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

114 responses to “ANOTHER WEEKEND OVER”

  1. Oh those student japes!

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    1. I, of course, never took took part in anything like this. Only witness to it…

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      1. I’m sure you didn’t 😉

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  2. Dear Iain,

    The best? Sounds like a crazy party of some sort. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Apparently there are some youngsters who like doing this sort of thing…! Thanks Rochelle

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  3. That had me grinning from ear to ear, especially the matter of fact “Good night?” “The best”.

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    1. Thank you Sandra, a pleasing reaction 🙂

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  4. Ah the joys of youth. I love how Frank just takes it all in his stride

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    1. Thanks Siobhan, I think Frank may have been here before 🙂

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  5. Hamish has some pretty rude friends.

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    1. I don’t know, they seem to get on pretty well.

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      1. I prefer friends who aren’t into bondage.

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  6. To me the best part is Frank leaving him like he found him. I do hope my friends would treat me better, no matter how I got into that sort of a trouble. Nicely done.

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    1. Thank you. I think they’re good mates, Frank must understand he needs time to sit and reflect 🙂

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  7. I’ve heard the expression, “he phlegmatic English” but this guy takes first prize! 😉

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    1. Clearly he has been here before! Thanks Christine

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  8. That made me laugh. Esp his friend left him in that shape. Boys. LOL

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    1. Thanks Stu, that’s all I was looking for, just a small chuckle 🙂

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  9. Oh yeah. Been there. November first is rightly called the Day of the Dead in some neighborhoods.

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    1. I hope it wasn’t you in the cage!

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  10. I remember telling the boss’s secretary that we will stand by her if she is jailed – for 15 min every morning 🙂 It was about a copyright issue.

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  11. Sincerely hope it is not a portend of things to come. Great write.

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    1. Thank you, I hope not too.

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  12. Teehee! Frank is a very callous man.
    I think it’s great that you took on the challenge of seeing the prompt absolutely literally. You aced it!

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    1. Thank you Penny, sometimes I do like to just go with exactly what you see and find a simple explanation for it!

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    You took me back to student days, lovely.

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    1. Sounds like you had a good time Michael 🙂

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  14. Nice light take on the picture and at least he wasn’t getting married in the morning!

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    1. Thanks Jilly – true, he wasn’t missing anything important!

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  15. This is hilarious in its subtleness. “Good night?” “The best.” See you tonight. I’ll let them know you won’t be in work today,” I can just imagine what the neighbors will think.

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    1. Thanks Alicia, I bet it’s not the first time the neighbours have witnessed something like this 🙂

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  16. Haha! Loved the light hilarity! 🙂

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    1. Thank you Jan, that’s all I was looking for 🙂

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  17. Nice take. Sounds like the end of a typical student party…heh.

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    1. Thanks Sascha – not sure I would like to be at the aftermath of your student parties! 🙂

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  18. Well now, I CERTAINLY never had to be strapped inside my shopping cart, after a night on the town!
    😀 😀

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    1. Hmmm, something tells me there’s a story here Liz 🙂

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      1. Once upon a time, in a land, far, far away… 😉

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  19. Now, that’s kinda cruel… but no doubt deserved. heheh!

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    1. He seems to think it was worth it anyway 🙂

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  20. LOL. Ah… those were the days.

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    1. Ha, thanks Alice 🙂

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  21. Oh, one of those nights!

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    1. You’ve had a few like this Russell? 🙂

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      1. Well you know, I’ve seen movies and stuff. 🤣

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  22. Ha! Great story. Frank is a cool cat.

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  23. Just leave him there, that’s the way to go 🙂 Sounds like Hamish is trying to relive his student days.

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    1. Some never seem to leave them behind

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  24. Some friend Frank is!

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    1. Perhaps he understands this is something Hamish needs to go through…

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  25. That gave me a good chuckle. And no, of course you never did anything like this. 🙂

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  26. This was a hoot and I’ll never understand the whole fraternity thing… they are all nuts, to be sure!
    Now… all good and dandy that Frank takes it all in stride… but to leave him there? That’s just mean!

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    1. In the UK we don’t have the extreme of the frat houses. Not something I think I would enjoy too much!

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      1. Nor in Canada… thankfully…

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  27. it happens. it reminds me of a college graduation ritual in italy that i witnessed before. 🙂

    Strange Graduation Ritual

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    1. Thanks for the link, enjoyed that!

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  28. Fun … Fun … Fun … by all except Hammish. I guess this is a boys will be boys thing.
    Great write …
    Isadora 😎

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  29. Hahaha oh dear. Poor thing. He couldn’t have helped him out?

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    1. Best let him be 🙂

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  30. I’m sitting here alone in a cafe laughing out loud with everyone looking at me.
    Well-done.

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  31. Crazy cruel friends he has. I pity him 🙂 A funny take on the prompt, Lain.

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  32. I love Frank’s casual reaction to Hamish locked in a cage on the front lawn. Ah, the wonders of youth! =) Enjoyed your story!

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    1. You’ve never had this in your front garden? 😉

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      1. Hmmm, not that I recall (haha). Hope you are having a nice weekend!

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  33. Imaginative take on the prompt Iain. Nice one.

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  34. Great story. Lousy friend, leaving him like that 🙂

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    1. I think they have an understanding in their friendship 🙂

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      1. I sure hope so 🙂

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  35. Enjoyed it. Sounds like Hamish might be getting too old for these things, if one ever does get too old. Frank seems to look down upon him for hanging out with student “friends” who seem ever so much worse friends than Frank is. He just believes in “”natural consequences”, as they call it in the parenting world. You made your bed: now lie in it!

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    1. I think that is exactly Frank’s attitude 🙂

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    1. We were all young once 🙂

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  36. Just another regular, boring, mundane day in a boy’s life 🙂

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    1. If only my life was this mundane! 🙂

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  37. Awesome take Iain and superbly done!

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  38. Haha! Don’t know what they’ve done the previous night, but it sounds like he had a lot of fun.

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    1. There must be some story behind it!

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  39. That’s what you call high spirits that could have unforeseen consequences. Students! Doesn’t one just love them, provided you don’t end up as a victim of their drunken humour?

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    1. Yes, love them from afar, but not involved with them!

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  40. Not what I would call the best night. But hey, it appeals to some. Loved how Frank was so blasé about the whole thing, perhaps he was used to Hamish’s ways.

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    1. Exactly, I think they have been friends for a long time and been through a few adventures like this! 🙂

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  41. That puts a whole new twist on the phrase, “calling in sick.”
    Great take on the prompt. I loved it, Iain.

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    1. Thanks Russell. I think he is very sick in many different ways!

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  42. But, will Hamish get to the church on time. A humours take, liked it.

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  43. Aww man…he left him there? lol
    Only guys would do this to each other and call each otter friends.

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    1. It’s a special bond between blokes 🙂

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      1. LOL…yes I have witnessed it.

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  44. Hamish should freshen up and get himself to work. Oh wait, he’s stuck. Fun story!

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    1. Thank you. I wonder if they would notice if he turned up dressed like that!?

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      1. Depends on what kind of company he works for. 😉

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  45. Thanks for the light relief amongst all the macabre this week! I was thinking Stag night japery but it seems it’s just a normal weekend night for Hamish…

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    1. Yeah, they dont need a special occassion to hhave a good party…

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  46. Nice of him to help his friend out the next morning. Lol.

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    1. Well he is covering for him at work at least 😉

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      1. Haha 😆

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  47. Very fun read. Very realistic too.

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