POTTERING IN THE GARAGE

Mary was as surprised as her gawking neighbours when the string of black vans pulled up outside her house with a screech of tyres and flashing lights.

Armed MI5 agents rushed across her perfectly manicured lawn and flowerbeds, surrounding the house.

‘Come out now. Hands where we can see them!’

Instinctively she raised her hands and stepped out the front door.

‘On your knees! Where is he?’

At that the automatic garage door began to open. The guns took aim.

Reginald sheepishly appeared, ‘If I could just explain…’

Behind him the ball of perpetual motion energy turned.


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Copyright Douglas M. McIlroy

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

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116 responses to “POTTERING IN THE GARAGE”

  1. They’re arresting him for breaking the second law of thermodynamics? Fun story, Iain

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    1. Possibly ‘disappearing’ him before he or his device falls into the wrong hands i.e. not their own. Thanks Neil

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  2. You kept up the tempo, and then the end … Wonderful!

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  3. Yes, the story had a sense of heading somewhere definite and did end on a very definitive note. Good writing Kelly.

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  4. Maybe they did come for the perpetual energy device.

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    1. I think if any government found one of their citizen’s had discovered perpetual energy they would most definitely come for it 🙂

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  5. Dear Iain,

    Oh, you left me with all kinds of questions. I can picture the whole scene. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks Rochelle – amazing what you can discover tinkering around in the garage.

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  6. Makes the contents of my garage seem very dull! Excellent as ever Iain

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    1. Indeed, I wish my shed had something exciting like this in there! Thanks Keith

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  7. Love the way your mind thinks Iain.

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    1. Thank you Di (I think!) 🙂

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  8. This is a suspense until the last line came. good read.

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  9. Teehee! Reginald didn’t expect that!

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    1. He may not have realised the consequences of his discovery until now!

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  10. Heaven forbid that the security services should overreact, hmm.
    Fast-paced thriller in 100 words, pretty neat.

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    1. The security services are of course known for their tact and restraint…

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  11. All that’s lacking is the sure-fire formula to turn lead into gold! Well done.

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    1. The government may set him to working on that one next…

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  12. Great take which actually incorporated the prompt directly. Well done.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Thank you Rowena – of course I have no idea what that big grey thing actually is!

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      1. You must be from marketing then. You don’t need to know or understand what it is as long as you can sell it.

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  13. Great story! I could use some perpetual energy right now! 🙂

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    1. Ha, couldn’t we all, I’m struggling on towards finishing up for Christmas at work – the energy is draining fast! 🙂

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  14. Ha, your title is fun considering the direction of the story, which is excellent, btw.

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    1. Thanks Sascha, amazing what you can do when having a potter around 🙂

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      1. Evidently. Maybe I need to try to potter around. 🙂

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    I hope he survives the hail of bullets

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    1. Poor Reginald, I’m hoping they only arrest him and hold him in an undisclosed location for now!

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  16. Oh Reginald, you brilliant man, you just had to get yourself on the government’s radar.

    A fun story and well-written as always, Iain! 🙂

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    1. Thank you Jade – if only he hadn’t bragged about it on Facebook, eh?! 🙂

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  17. Wonderful take, Iain. So imaginative. My mind tends to run to more literal lines, where so many of you are SO creative. Fun to read 🙂

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    1. Thank you – there is plenty of room for all kinds of takes, that’s the fun. I think I sit somewhere in the middle – not as far out as some 🙂

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      1. True. The variety of viewpoints is truly the fun. I’m always amazed at the differences.

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  18. Started feeling like a scene in your book (of which I’ve a mere 25 pages to read)!

    Poor Mary, probably had no clue her hubby was up to stuff…

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    1. Thanks Dale – the home stretch – look forward to hearing what you think of it! 🙂

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  19. So that’s what that thing is. Now I know.

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    1. I bet no one thought that’s what it would look like in the end!

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      1. It does look a bit scrappy.

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  20. It is amazing how much of a story you tell in only one-hundred words. I could picture the scene and feel the tension. Then Reginald sheepishly walks out of the garage where he discovered the impossible. Hopefully, they’ll take care of him, he’s got a lot going on in that brain, and in a garage to boot. His poor wife! 🙂

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    1. I’m not sure Reginald or Mary are ready for what will happen next! Thanks Brenda 🙂

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  21. Breaking the laws is a serious thing… especially the laws of physics.

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    1. Ha, quite. Who knows where this will end up.

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  22. Ha! Poor Roger, and more importantly, poor Mary, her carefully manicured garden might never recover from the excesses of those MI5 brutes 🙂

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    1. I’m glad you picked up on that – all that hard work ruined!

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  23. we need a sequel to know the end

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    1. I will let you decide what happens next!

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  24. What was Reginald doing inside the garage? Hope MI5 did not shoot him.

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    1. The last line tells you Abhijit.

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      1. Somehow I always end up missing the message.

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      2. What does the ball in perpetual motion energy do?

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      3. If anyone ever cracks the secret to make perpetual energy a lot of our problems would be solved. Unfortunately, it’s impossible due to the laws of physics – but some still dream! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Perpetual_motion

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  25. Can’t have the ordinaries running around the place with such world-changing achievements. That sort of thing belongs in the safe, trustworthy and capable hands of the government… 😉

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    1. Yes, because they never make a mess of anything. Strong and stable…

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  26. Perpetual energy… that sounds enticing. Oh wait, I’ve a grand-daughter that fits that description. Good one, Ian.

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    1. Thanks Sandra – can we hook her up to the power grid?

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  27. What fun! But poor Mary! I also love the title. Well done!

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    1. Thank you Alicia, are you a potter-er too? 🙂

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  28. Brilliant. I loved this. Hilarious piece. Love his sheepish reaction

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  29. i wonder if i should root for him. that device could be dangerous if it falls into the wrong hands.

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  30. Very nicely done Iain, you had me on the edge of my seat. And now you’ve got me researching perpetual motion… Good work!!

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    1. See if you can solve the problem 😉

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  31. Sure hope he gets that chance to explain!

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    1. Plenty of time for that during ‘interrogation’…!

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  32. Ya gotta keep all that fancy new tech under wraps, ya know? It would upset all the energy companies otherwise, not to mention the crashing economies. Nice read Iain!

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    1. You’re sensing conspiracy here Russell? 😉

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  33. Technology is a two way sword but here his efforts are being doubted. Mary must be angry too as gardens are not that easy to maintain… 😉

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  34. Maybe Mary ought to make it out to the garage more often. 😊

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    1. She doesn’t want to know what he gets up to in his garage! 😉

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  35. This is really intriguing. Would love to know what happens next!

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    1. A long spell away for Reginald I imagine! Thanks Lisa

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  36. Glad to know the authorities are monitoring for the illegal use of perpetual motion energy. LOL Nice one Iain.

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  37. Great use of the prompt, Iain. I wonder who ratted him out?

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    1. Good point – a fellow garage inventor perhaps?

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  38. Ah, yes – the government wouldn’t like that!

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    1. Unless they could have it and control it and no one else got it…!

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  39. Great stuff, you got the number 1 spot, dead jel, I shall now google ball of perpetual motion, i’m familiar with the ball of confusion!

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    1. First time I’ve made no.1 in a long, long time 🙂

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  40. Wow.. He must be a genius to pull it off.

    Too much drama and suspence for a 100 words story.
    Take a bow, Iain.

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  41. Another wonderful story full of plot and laced with a bit of wry humour. I will look at people’s garage doors with more interest now.

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    1. You never know what’s going on behind closed (garage) doors!

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  42. How did they sniffed his invention? Excellent story.

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    1. They have spies everywhere!

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  43. Liked this. So much more story to be told here.

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  44. Loved the high octane surrounding of the house, confronted by the sheepish Reginald & his hobby – perpetual motion. Clever stuff, and nicely done.

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  45. I have a feeling the authorities are going to take the ball away for investigation. Great use of the prompt!

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    1. Yep, I don’t think poor Reginald will get to keep his work…

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  46. It’s probably the blokes from the power company and not MI5 😉
    Nice fast paced flash.

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    1. Or at least them working together. Thanks.

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  47. I enjoyed the humour in this Iain, sounds like he’s stumbled on something he shouldn’t have

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    1. Yep, and is perhaps ill-prepared to deal with!

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  48. Tense one! The neighbours will be going into gossip overload.

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    1. Oh yes, that’ll keep them going for a couple of weeks 🙂

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  49. I love the tension in this one but the first sentence/paragraph is choppy. Is it just me or is there a typo?

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    1. Reads okay to me Dawn, not sure what you’re seeing there. Thanks for reading.

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      1. Okay…I got it now. lol
        Sorry about that.

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