Iain Kelly

Fiction Writing

ROLE REVERSAL

Ironing done, dinner cooking. Time to put the kettle on and rest for ten minutes before she got home.

It was hard work keeping his house in order, not that the women who ran the world understood. Just because he didn’t go out to work, didn’t mean he wasn’t working.

Just as he sat down the baby woke with a gurgle and a cough and the inevitable cry. Up he got.

It was never ending. He just needed a break, some space, time to himself for once…

Geoff woke with a start and wiped sweat from his brow. What a nightmare.

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Copyright Valerie J. Barrett

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

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99 responses to “ROLE REVERSAL”

  1. radhikasreflection Avatar
    radhikasreflection

    Haha! A good one Iain. Loved the punch the ending carried. Never under estimate the work of a homemaker ☺️

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Absolutely, thank you 🙂

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  2. Colline Avatar
    Colline

    For a moment I thought I was reading about an alternate state. Good one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Colline, that was my plan – how different things could be!

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  3. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    I sometimes think the breadwinner has the easy option! Nice one Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s certainly nice to be able to escape for a few hours of peace at work! 🙂

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  4. joyroses13 Avatar
    joyroses13

    Love this! Great job! I still rememeber the days my husband came home from work and 6 kids under the age of 5 were running around and he would just look at me wondering how I was still sane. LOL! They were our 2 kids and our neighbor’s 4 kids. Our children became best friends, but they were definitely some wild years!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I do the same when I get home to my wife and our twins! Thank you Joy 🙂

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      1. joyroses13 Avatar
        joyroses13

        Oh wow! You guys have your hands full with twins!
        My pleasure! 🙂

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  5. ceayr Avatar
    ceayr

    Fortunately, Iain, it seems the ladies are much more capable at this than we mere men😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      They do say stereotypes have a certain amount of basis in truth…

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  6. Tannille Avatar
    Tannille

    Think it would be difficult for anyone. Odds are it won’t be his fate but at least he might have empathy.
    Wait for the labour pain… 😀

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Haha, that’s one nightmare he will want to avoid 🙂

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  7. magickmermaid Avatar
    magickmermaid

    Great story! I hope Geoff keeps this in mind during waking hours 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you, I’m sure he will! 😉

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  8. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    I hope that Geoff woke to be a more understanding and helpful husband. At least he could wake up from it. 😉 Well written.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Rochelle, I think he may well learn to appreciate his wife more 😉

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  9. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    Ha a nightmare indeed,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Michael

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  10. pennygadd51 Avatar
    pennygadd51

    I hope Geoff now takes a fairer share of the housework! Nice gentle humour, Iain; I enjoyed it.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Penny, much appreciated 🙂

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  11. pensitivity101 Avatar
    pensitivity101

    Good story Iain, though for some it’s a reality they don’t mind. Glad Hubby and I like to share the housework etc!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Di

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  12. Sandra Avatar
    Sandra

    Let’s hope he now has a fuller appreciation of both their roles in the household. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Sandra

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  13. Kalpana Solsi Avatar
    Kalpana Solsi

    The role reversal should make him realize that housekeeping isn’t easy. and he has realized it.
    good take on the prompt.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  14. scr4pl80 Avatar
    scr4pl80

    LOL great one, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Janet 🙂

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  15. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
    Na’ama Yehuda

    Ha ha! Fantastic role reversal.
    I think more men (at least, more enlightened men) are becoming aware of the realities women had been expected to juggle all these centuries … but there are still many who are absolutely totally clueless … even in ‘modern’ countries.
    They should read your little story … 😉
    Na’ama

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you – I agree, some get it, more should!

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
        Na’ama Yehuda

        🙂 In time … It is a short history of women having any rights, especially when measured against millennia of oppression and control and minimization. Change takes time, and we are barely into a half-century of it, if that, and with much push back already, and many countries where even the first steps hadn’t yet been taken … With time …

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  16. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar
    Brenda’s Thoughts

    I really enjoyed this one and the last line was perfect! =)

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Brenda – it does seem to have been popular with the female readers this week! 😉

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  17. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    This is brilliant! I hope men realize how lucky they are.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Sadje – some do, more should 🙂

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        Yes more should.

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  18. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    “Egalia’s Daughters” is a novel with all traditional gender roles flipped. You might enjoy it. Probably not though 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It may give me nightmares like Geoff 😉

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  19. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    It sounds like he is on the verge of understanding… maybe it’s time he did some housework before it all explodes.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      You think he would have got it by now!

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  20. Nobbinmaug Avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    That’s my life, except it’s three dogs instead of a baby, and I don’t cook.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I hope you have someone who appreciates all you do 🙂

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      1. Nobbinmaug Avatar
        Nobbinmaug

        I’m the appreciative one. I appreciate that she works and lets me live in her house and stay home to write.

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  21. notestowomen Avatar
    notestowomen

    LOL. However, his nightmare is the reality for some men.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Very true. Thanks.

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  22. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Roll reversal is not easy to accept, is it!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It can be an eye opener!

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  23. draliman Avatar
    draliman

    Haha, poor Geoff 🙂
    Maybe (if he has a wife who takes care of things at home) this will teach him to appreciate her all the more!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I certainly hope so!

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  24. Vernon Avatar
    Vernon

    With more experience comes more tolerance and patience.

    We feel more compassionate rather than judgmental, for we now know just exactly how much pain those little ones can cause.

    Nice work!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Vernon

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  25. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    Satire at its most classic, Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Neil

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  26. Liz Young Avatar
    Liz Young

    Maybe he’ll have more empathy after that dream?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      You would hope so. Thanks Liz

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  27. Anita Avatar
    Anita

    Women have to live through that ‘nightmare’ everyday.
    But, some men have chosen this life and role-reversal too!
    Keeping a house in order is really tough.

    Three Musketeers – Anita

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Anita

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  28. David Stewart Avatar
    David Stewart

    What a nightmare indeed. Sometimes I envy my sister with four kids, a lot of times I don’t. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I feel the same about my wife and our kids! 😉

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  29. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    he must be relieved that it’s just a dream. for what it’s worth, it gives him an idea what every homemaker has to go through everyday. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Hopefully he understands a bit better now!

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  30. Dale Avatar
    Dale

    As a dad of twins, I’m thinking you know of what you speak!!
    Good one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Oh yes, it is written from experience this one! 😉

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      1. Dale Avatar
        Dale

        🙂

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  31. aheartforafrica641064503 Avatar
    aheartforafrica641064503

    Nice one, Iain. Now he has an idea of what it’s like to be a homemaker.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Hopefully he will empathise more now!

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  32. DB McNicol Avatar
    DB McNicol

    Nice twist, Iain!

    https://authorshutterbug.wordpress.com/2019/06/13/fridayfictioneers-the-fortuneteller/

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you DB

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  33. Laurie Bell Avatar
    Laurie Bell

    Brilliantly done. Role reversal for the ages. Well done. And good to see happening with some fabulous families

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Laurie, glad you liked it 🙂

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  34. patriciaruthsusan Avatar
    patriciaruthsusan

    Ah, ha, ha. This was both funny and well written, Iain. That would no doubt be a nightmare for many husbands. 😀 — Suzanne

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Suzanne, glad you enjoyed it 🙂

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  35. kzmcb Avatar
    kzmcb

    I really enjoyed this. Punchy and plausible. Maybe we were on a similar theme, though, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  36. Woman walking Max Avatar
    Woman walking Max

    Cleverly done Iain. for the first few lines, I assumed he was a woman. A witty way to consider gender roles. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you, glad you spotted my intention 🙂

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  37. James McEwan Avatar
    James McEwan

    “” and rest for ten minutes before she got home”” these few words added a sinsiter element for me.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks, good spot, I wanted to hint at a domineering, even abusive spouse. Glad you picked up on it.

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  38. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    Oh, Iain, this is a total treasure. The world turned upside down, for sure.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Linda 🙂

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  39. gahlearner Avatar
    gahlearner

    Don’t we wish it were real? Next night he dreams of having to work and do the housework, and tend to the kid while his wife feels she deserves rest. And the night following he’ll dream of being a single parent… And men in general can do everything women do and vice versa. Most men just don’t see the need to change things. Good one, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you, fortunately I think many men’s attitudes are changing, but it will take time 🙂

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      1. gahlearner Avatar
        gahlearner

        That’s true. A lot has changed over the years. More needed, but there’s hope.

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  40. magarisa Avatar
    magarisa

    To me, that would also be a nightmare… I admire homemakers who do so much and manage to stay sane! Nice one.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you 🙂

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  41. magarisa Avatar
    magarisa

    I forgot to mention that I finally posted a brief review of your novel:

    https://detoutetderien2015.wordpress.com/2019/06/13/a-justified-state-a-thriller-by-iain-kelly/

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you so much for taking the time and so pleased you enjoyed the novel. Halfway through the sequel so far 🙂

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      1. magarisa Avatar
        magarisa

        You’re welcome. Glad to hear that! ☺

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  42. Kelley Farrell Avatar
    Kelley Farrell

    Ha! Poor guy. Good one Iain

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      Iain Kelly

      Thank you Kelley

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  43. Sascha Darlington Avatar
    Sascha Darlington

    lol Funnily enough I just read a similar scene in a book where the father had to deal with his three children for a day. Quite an awakening. Well done! 🙂

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      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Sascha

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  44. Margaret Avatar
    Margaret

    A big shock for him, I’m sure. Isn’t it funny how household tasks cause such problems in relationships. I think they should put that in pre-nuptial contracts, never mind the financial arrangements. I love this story – poor Geoff.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It would keep everyone right if it was written down in law! Thanks Margaret

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  45. Lynn Love Avatar
    Lynn Love

    Excellent role reversal there, Iain. Parenthood’s tough, no matter how you cut it. Great take on the prompt

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Lynn 🙂

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  46. michaelwynnauthor Avatar
    michaelwynnauthor

    Haha, very relatable Iain. Fortunately for me, we had ours before the world had changed too much. 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Lucky you! 😉

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