Felicity tried to interrupt the critic, but he had built up such a head of steam he wouldn’t be stopped.

‘The sunflower, you see, is a comment on Van Gogh’s work and the astronomical price OF art at modern auctions. It is saying to you, the viewer, is art really worth that much when a great work can be reduced to a mere child’s interpretation and still have the same meaning?’

One or two of the tour group began to titter. Felicity tried once more, ‘Excuse me, sir,’ she raised her hand tentatively.

The critic glowered at her, a look that told the gallery assistant she was beneath contempt. He drew his eyes from her and carried on.

‘Similarly, the artist has given us a child’s representation of various animals. A donkey, again with the sunflower; a dog reduced to a head and a bone; a decorative cow. What is the artist trying to tell us with this expert deconstruction? One must leave that for the viewer to interpret.’

He left his question hanging and moved on. The group followed, suppressing smiles and laughter, passing the sign that read: ‘Local Nursery Farmyard Art Project,’ and into the main exhibition hall, where the latest national modern art show awaited them.


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Copyright Susan Spaulding

Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Susan Spaulding. For more details visit HERE.

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25 responses to “CRITICAL INTERPRETATION”

  1. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    But these paintings are just great, just like your story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They do have a charm

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  2. Abhijit Ray Avatar
    Abhijit Ray

    Not a very knowledgeable critic, was he?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Are any of them?

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  3. Violet Lentz Avatar

    No one likes a know it all and it seems as though this one got his.. Nice write Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Violet

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  4. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

    Actually, I took the weary-looking donkey to be a nod to the fact that although modern society needs to work tirelessly to survive, doing so so enables future generations to blossom. Either that or the donkey’s name is petal! Now who’s whos talking donkey s…t?

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ever thought about becoming an art critic Keith?

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      1. Keith's Ramblings Avatar

        Funny you should mention that…no!

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  5. notestowomen Avatar

    Nice one, Iain 🙂 It made me chuckle.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I am pleased 🙂

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  6. scr4pl80 Avatar

    Pompous donkey! Nicely done. Actually, those are pretty good pieces of art for nursery school age!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think they’re actually quite good – I hope I’m not offending any artists out there!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Quite often!

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  7. ceayr Avatar

    Critics, pah!
    There are even folk who don’t appreciate my stories!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I find that hard to believe!

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  8. Piyali Avatar

    Critics are always the annoying Mr/Ms Know it Alls

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  9. Liz H Avatar

    Everybody’s a critic, which is why we need to maintain a sense of humor~~
    Fun times!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Ain’t that the truth!

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  10. anuragbakhshi Avatar

    Art lies in the eyes of the critic!

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  12. John Yeo Avatar

    Great write Iain~ I particularly liked the The interpretation of the Asses sunflower. Bottom would be green with envy. 😊

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Haha, thanks John!

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