Iain Kelly

Fiction Writing

FOR OUR OWN GOOD

The bars appeared overnight. We didn’t notice until Bill left the house for work and walked smack into them outside the front door.

The Presidential decree came soon after. Lockdown again, only this one enforced by steel cages. A strong rebuke: until we could all learn to behave for the greater good, we’ll remain behind bars.

‘They can’t do this!’ screamed social media in post after post. But they could and they did. I can’t say I disagree: we’re useless when left to personal responsibility.

Drones dropped food parcels and medicine instead of bombs, so that made a nice change.

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Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

Iain Kelly

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61 responses to “FOR OUR OWN GOOD”

  1. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    Nice play on words. Iain. Ahh, those days of lockdown. How I miss them. The hope that when we came out the other side it would all be so different.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It is different, unfortunately in a bad way… Thanks Neil

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  2. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    A very nice story Iain

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Sadje 🙂

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  3. Vartika Avatar
    Vartika

    Nobody likes to be in cage. Good story

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you 🙂

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Iain,

    Prison, no matter how pleasant, is still prison, isn’t it? Makes me wonder why this lockdown. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Do we need a reason anymore. Just bad things in general that keep happening I guess! Thanks Rochelle 🙂

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  5. Michael Avatar
    Michael

    A great use of the prompt, well told

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Michael

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  6. Tannille Avatar
    Tannille

    Sad reality. The responsible always pay for the irresponsible.
    There are worse ways to be in lockdown though.

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  7. Bear Avatar
    Bear

    Deep. HArd to be too coherent this morning, yet. But this could be so real, it’s scary.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you. Sending you and husband best wishes.

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  8. Yamini Ali MacLean Avatar
    Yamini Ali MacLean

    Hari Om
    so often the few spoil it for the many… and there were times that I wished I had such a door to close on others! YAM xx

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I’ll stay behind my locked door if it means keeping safe, not sure I trust that many others these days! 🙂

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  9. Liz H Avatar
    Liz H

    Are we ever truly free? Sometimes the hardest iron bars, those that suppress magic, are the ones created by our own bad choices.
    Shades of Hansel being fattened up for the witch? 😉

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I think we’ve all learned recently that our freedom is fragile, whether from a pandemic or war, it is to be treasured.

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  10. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    At least there’s a hint of positivity in the final few words.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Clinging on to any scrap of good news!

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  11. Rowena Avatar
    Rowena

    Iain, I’ve always been philosophical. However, the last two years have accelerated things. I’ve questioned why sensible, intelligent friends have walked away from their jobs instead of getting vaccinated. I’ve wondered about people gathering unmasked in crowds, as though they’re immune. I’ve locked myself away to stay alive, and haven’t missed a lot of people, but have realized many of us are struggling in strange and unpredictable ways from these lockdowns and things are rather weird and unsettling. I have tried to keep myself buoyant, but have found myself sinking a few times too.
    I thought you might appreciate a post I wrote this morning which is quite upbeat after I saw two rainbow lorikeets in our garden: https://beyondtheflow.wordpress.com/2022/03/16/rainbows-on-an-overcast-day/
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Rowena, the toll on mental health, not to mention friendships and relationships is something that can’t be measured over the last couple of years.

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  12. Anita Avatar
    Anita

    Imagine iron bars appearing in front of our doors overnight!
    This lockdown is serious. Phew!
    Drones providing food and essentials for those literally “behind bars”!
    Interesting.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Anita

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  13. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    *Excellent* story, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        You’re welcome.

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  14. Danny James Avatar
    Danny James

    Life without parole.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      No chance of escape. Cheers Danny!

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  15. larry trasciatti Avatar
    larry trasciatti

    Even if the food is good it is still a totalitarian measure

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      A fine line between protecting and imprisoning.

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      1. larry trasciatti Avatar
        larry trasciatti

        Yes there always is

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  16. magickmermaid Avatar
    magickmermaid

    Definitely a great statement of our current times.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you

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  17. pennygadd51 Avatar
    pennygadd51

    Savagely satirical story, Iain, especially the last line.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Penny

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  18. CGraith Avatar
    CGraith

    Have to be careful with this story if it leaks to social media it will end up on the news and who knows what would happen.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      I’m sure someone already thought of it!

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  19. plaridel Avatar
    plaridel

    so food parcels and medicines were dropped, but what’s the use when folks are locked out?

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  20. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
    Na’ama Yehuda

    The irony of dropping food and medicine outside people’s reach isn’t lost on me …

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      A government that can say it is doing it all it can to look after people, when in fact…

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      1. Na'ama Yehuda Avatar
        Na’ama Yehuda

        Indeed. …

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  21. Nobbinmaug Avatar
    Nobbinmaug

    It’s sad that people habitually put themselves over the greater good to the point where this seems realistic. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yes, selfishness is a very human nature.

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  22. Bill Avatar
    Bill

    There you go again, Iain, bringing reality into the world of fiction. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Bill, sadly so.

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  23. draliman Avatar
    draliman

    I’m glad it didn’t go quite that far,

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Not yet anyway…

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  24. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar
    Brenda’s Thoughts

    I think they’ll remain behind bars for a very long time. The greater good is not a popular idea, sadly. Nicely done, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It’s almost a lost concept these days! Thanks Brenda

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  25. Laurie Bell Avatar
    Laurie Bell

    Personal responsibility…

    Oh how I wish we hadn’t learned how little most care for each other. I fear even if it was enforced, people would find a way out with little regard for endangering others

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Yep, we are a selfish bunch.

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  26. Margaret Avatar
    Margaret

    Very good. Key sentence for me in this story is ‘We’re useless when left to personal responsibility.’ That’s a very troubling thought, but I’ve got to say I think you’re correct. How tragic for us all.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It seems to have been proved this way, and it is tragic. Thanks Margaret

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  27. Inside the Mind of Isadora Avatar
    Inside the Mind of Isadora

    Lock down seems to be a way of life now-a-days.
    Just when we think the crisis is over anothe mutant virus shows up.
    Dreadful … the world, our lives are not going to be the same … ever.
    Powerful timely write, Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you.

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  28. ahtdoucette Avatar
    ahtdoucette

    Love the dark humor in this one. At least, I am going to assume it is humor. And intentionally dark. 😉 Well written as ever Iain.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      It was dark and humour, and also a little bit real… Thank you

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  29. Sascha Darlington Avatar
    Sascha Darlington

    Good story, Ian. When the pandemic started, people worried about this kind of thing or harassing neighbors they thought could be sick. The things we’ve learned about our fellow humans–enlightening times.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thanks Sascha, not much of what we have learned has been good unfortunately!

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  30. Woman walking Max Avatar
    Woman walking Max

    Very topical and fair comment. Wry humour in the line, dropping food parcels instead of bombs.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar
      Iain Kelly

      Thank you!

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