SIGHTSEEING IN THAILAND

‘It’s not a race!’ called Somchai.

Lamai redoubled her efforts, breaking into as much of a sprint as she could muster while pulling the occupied rickshaw.

‘Watch out for the hole!’

She swerved in front of him, the rickshaw threatening to topple over. Somchai took evasive action to avoid careening into the back of her.

If this was the game, there was no way he would let his sister beat him. He threw himself forward. TheY arrived with a screech in a dead heat.

‘I won!’ Lamai shouted.

‘A draw!’ Somchai shouted.

Behind them, Archie and Agnes wobbled out of their seats unsteadily.

‘Next time, we walk,’ said Agnes. Archie nodded his agreement.

Copyright Amanda Forestwood

Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read more stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

You can read all the Agnes and Archie stories HERE.

I’m delighted to announce I will be once again partnering with The Book Guild to publish my next novel. ‘All We Cannot Leave Behind’ is due out in February 2024. Stay tuned for plenty more details and news over the coming months!

‘The State Trilogy’ and ‘The Barra Boy’ available now.

42 responses to “SIGHTSEEING IN THAILAND”

  1. Next year: chariot racing in the Colisseum

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    1. I would be up for that!

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  2. I loved how you slid in your staring couple at the end.

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  3. Love this. Nicely done.

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  4. Dear Iain,

    A great race for the drivers but not so much for the passengers. 😉 Fun stuff.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  5. There was a movie, I think Foul Play, where Chevy Chase “steals” a cab for a chase scene through San Fransisco. Half way through they notice that an elderly couple is in the back seat… For some reason this reminds me of it.

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    1. Sounds exactly like the scene I have imagined!

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      1. After putting up the comment, I looked up the clip (yes, Foul Play), and the scene was as funny as I remembered.

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  6. Archie and Agnes got a little more than they bargained for 🙂

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    1. I hope they didn’t have to pay extra for the privilege!

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  7. You made me chortle! Good one Iain!

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  8. Yikes. What a ride.

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  9. They were just along for the ride, not a race!

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    1. Not what they expected! 🙂

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  10. I bet they never forgot that part of their vacation! Funny and fun story.

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  11. 😀 Archie and Agnes will have great time retelling this adventure when they get home!

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    1. One to laugh at in the future!

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  12. Hahaha I love this! Both the drivers and the passengers. So much voice in so few lines. Beautiful characterisation

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    1. Thanks so much 🙂

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  13. What a fun story, so action packed. I was wondering who were the passangers. Agnes and Archie make it perfect.

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  14. Ah, Archie and Agnes. That was good fun. Why do I suddenly want some Chai?

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  15. Funny and very well written using the appropriate number of words (which is more than I can say for myself!) My apologies for that mistake.

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    1. (I strayed over by a couple this week – but close enough!) Thank you!

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      1. Mine was hardly a little stray but everyone has been so understanding about it!

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  16. 😅That made me smile, thanks Iain 🙌

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    1. I’m glad! Thank you 🙂

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  17. i bet it was an experience they’d never forget. 🙂

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    1. One to remember! 🙂

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  18. Great fun! Nothing like sibling rivalry.

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  19. This is hilarious. I can imagine the faces of Agnes and Archie as they stumble from their rickshaws. I look forward to reading your next book, Iain.

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  20. Haha. A bit of sibling rivalry never hurt anyone. Nice one.

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