IAIN KELLY

LIFELONG FRIENDS

Bill took Agnes’ arm and steered her to the pavement. ‘One too many prosecco?’

‘Come on, follow the white lines home,’ Archie called back to them.

‘Remember that time you followed the wrong white line…’

‘…all the way off the end of the boardwalk.’ Bill and Archie finished off Agnes’ story.

Archie took Agnes’ arm. ‘Another holiday over.’

‘Same time next year, Bill?’

‘Of course, wouldn’t miss it.’ Bill waved them off.

He felt the pain in his midriff.

He didn’t want to ruin a perfect evening. He would tell them later that he wouldn’t make their annual get together next year.


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Copyright Ted Strutz

Written as part of the Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields (more details HERE). The idea is to write a short story of 100 words based on the photo prompt (above).

To read stories of 100 words based on this week’s prompt, visit HERE.

102 responses to “LIFELONG FRIENDS”

  1. Jenny Kennedy Avatar

    This brought tears to my eyes. Such a sad story, beautifully told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jennifer.

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  2. neilmacdon Avatar

    elegant and spare, Iain

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  3. Sheena Avatar

    O Bill. I hope he makes it to next year.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sheena

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  4. ceayr Avatar

    Sweet story, expertly told, and with excellent sting in the tail.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you CE, much appreciated.

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  5. jillyfunnell Avatar

    What a poignant story – of course I hope he recovers and joins them next year. So well told.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jilly

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  6. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Oh sad, but at least he had this year.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Di, and many happy ones beforehand too.

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        That’s what matters, the memories.

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  7. michael1148humphris Avatar
    michael1148humphris

    Sharp magical story writing.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Michael, much appreciated.

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  8. notestowomen Avatar

    Beautiful and touching story, Iain. I really do hope that he will be there for their annual get-together next year.

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  9. aheartforafrica641064503 Avatar
    aheartforafrica641064503

    Sad story, beautifully told. Hopefully, things look up for him and he’s there next year.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      There is always hope. Thank you

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  10. Mike Avatar

    A sad tale well told Iain.

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  11. Dale Avatar

    So well told. It is bound to happen eventually. Sadly, we don’t live forever. Beautiful friendships to be treasured.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Dale, unfortunately, that’s life.

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      1. Dale Avatar

        It is. So best take advantage of every moment you do have… you never know…

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  12. J Hardy Carroll Avatar

    Good sense of foreboding in this piece. Cancer? Suicide? Could be either of them.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks. My thought was cancer, and he had already had bad news about it…

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  13. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Iain,

    Sweet but sad tale. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rochelle

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  14. trentpmcd Avatar

    A sad tale, but well told

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Trent. Congratulations on your book 🙂

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      1. trentpmcd Avatar

        Thanks 🙂

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  15. shivamt25 Avatar

    It was a roller coaster ride of emotions. Nicely done!

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  16. Rowena Avatar

    Great take, Iain. My parents are in their 70s now and there have been those people they’ve known for years and those reunions and they’re starting to drop off. In a few weeks time, they’re celebrating their 50th wedding anniversary. There’s such a hotch potch of people coming and quite a few who have passed away. We’ve also been revisiting old photos lately. It’s a great time for reminiscing and catching up.
    Best wishes,
    Rowena

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Rowena. It’s sad looking ahead and knowing this time is coming to us all, but as you say, a chance to look back and think about a lifetime of memories.

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  17. EagleAye Avatar

    Oh so sad! At least it seems they had many good years together.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      they made the most of the time they had, who can ask for more?

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  18. StuHN Avatar

    Poor Archie. One hope is that it’s just really bad gas. But, a slim hope.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Clutching at straws, but you never know!

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  19. pennygadd51 Avatar

    You paint the picture expertly; the three friends who have so many shared memories that they first prompt and then complete each others anecdotes. And having shown us this beautiful friendship, very delicately you show us that it will be broken within twelve months.
    Grief and sadness are the inevitable companions of joy, alas. Let’s be thankful for the joy while we have it, and even more thankful for the memories later.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Penny, you sum it up nicely.

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  20. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I can fully understand why you don’t want to destroy that last evening together…. I hope there will be a lot of Prosecco at the funeral…

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      They certainly will give him the appropriate send off.

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  21. 4963andypop Avatar

    It rings very true, the sick friend choosing not to spoil the mood of the others. Maybe they should get together more often.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That may be one of their regrets. Thank you

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  22. granonine Avatar

    Oh, no. How sad, and how kind of him not to burden his friends at that moment.. I hope, though, that he will contact them soon and let them be with him as much as possible.

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  23. Sascha Darlington Avatar

    Oh! And yet, I understand why he wouldn’t want to spoil their evening, hopefully he will let them know soon. Well done, Iain!

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sascha

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  24. draliman Avatar

    Humorous right up until that last bit. Very sad, nicely done.

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  25. Fatima Fakier Avatar

    Maybe he will surprise them and himself by living longer than expected. One more holiday, it just has to be.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      You are an optimist then 🙂

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      1. Fatima Fakier Avatar

        Hopelessly so…

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  26. Sandra Avatar

    So very sad Iain. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Sandra

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  27. yarnspinnerr Avatar

    A touching write. Beautifully crafted,

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  28. Russell Gayer Avatar

    Expertly done, like something from the Hallmark movie channel.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I think that’s a compliment… 😉

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  29. Akshata Ram Avatar

    thats a wonderful ritual and you had to end it with a twist.. life is fragile. Liked this one Ian

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Aks

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  30. Carol J Forrester Avatar

    Poor Bill. There’s such a melancholy in this. Reads wonderfully.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Carol

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  31. plaridel Avatar

    i appreciate him for being considerate not sharing bad news to his friends. at least, for the time being. hopefully, he’ll make it next year.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, I suppose he has a little hope he might make it.

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  32. Laurie Bell Avatar

    Oh no, sad ending. It’s was lovely and sweet and then foreboding… well told

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Laurie

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  33. Susan Avatar

    That’s sad. Maybe there is a miracle in his future.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Not sure if Bill believes in miracles – maybe he will now!

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  34. subroto Avatar

    Some people are considerate like that, they will never let their personal tragedy intrude upon another’s happiness. Nicely done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you, good to see you back 🙂

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  35. Dawn M. Miller Avatar

    He was fortunate to know, I think.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Some prefer to know, others prefer not too.

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  36. Piyali Avatar

    Hope he recovers and joins them for their annual get together next year. Very sad and beautifully written story.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much

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  37. Jennie Avatar

    Aww… this was sad, yet quite good.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Jennie

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      1. Jennie Avatar

        You are welcome, Iain.

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  38. James McEwan Avatar

    A nice build up that makes the ending so much better, although sad. I don’t go to many reunions, they mostly seem to be about ticking the attendance sheet to check who has died.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      That’s one way to look at them! Thanks James

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  39. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar

    Ouch! Nuf said. Oh! Except so well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Alicia

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  40. Sarah Ann Avatar
    Sarah Ann

    I have a sense Bill is going to keep putting off telling them what he needs to.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      He may well never build up the courage to tell them, or the desire.

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  41. magarisa Avatar

    What a bittersweet ending. Nicely told.

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  42. JoHawkTheWriter Avatar

    Ha! I see. Yes, we do have a similar theme to our stories. Great minds think alike. Nicely done.

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  43. Russell Avatar

    A well told tale! I feel for Bill and wish him well, though I doubt it will do him much good.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      I fear you are right. Thanks

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  44. Varad Avatar

    Oh, that was a punch to the gut (Pardon the pun!) towards the end. Great buildup to the unexpected end, Iain. Well done.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thanks Varad

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  45. justjoyfulness Avatar

    Sweet and sad! I was walking along with them until the end 🙂

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  46. lisarey1990 Avatar

    So emotional. You wrote it gorgeously.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Lisa, lovely compliment 🙂

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  47. Jan Morrill Avatar

    😦 Lovely and warm story of a lifelong friendship, Iain. Then, I got to the last line, which made the story even more beautiful, but oh, so sad. Even so, it made me want to read it again, to treasure even more, such a friendship.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Jane, very kind comment 🙂

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  48. Dahlia Avatar

    Ah so sad and so very well told

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Dahlia

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  49. deborahsdeliberations Avatar
    deborahsdeliberations

    What a beautiful story and so sad.

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    1. Iain Kelly Avatar

      Thank you Deborah

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